Talk:Pizza Ranch
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As a bit of background, my step-dad owns two Pizza Ranches in southern Iowa, and is a major financial backer for multiple stores; and I am a shift supervisor at two stores.
What makes Pizza Ranch unique is that most of their stores offer a host of dining options. Where else but Pizza Ranch can you get a pizza/chicken/salad bar buffet; carry-out your pizza; or have your box of chicken delivered right to your home? That friendly service has helped Pizza Ranch become the largest regional pizza chain in Iowa, Minnesota, North Dakota and South Dakota. [1]
Sounds more like advertising than anything else. I think the piece should be re-written neutrally, to mention that the type of service provided is not something unique, or new, but rather something not commonly found in the small towns Pizza Ranches are normally in. The article also calls an item on the bar "Tater Wedges," which are through advertising and corporate standards actually referred to as "Ranch Potatoes". Same mislabeling occurs with the "dessert pizza", which is referred to as "Cactus Bread". If it would help, I have mission statements, etc, that I could post here on the talk page. I have access to corporate standards sheets, as well as nutritional information (example: chicken is broasted in trans-fat free Asoyia Oil) that i can post to this page if asked. I don't feel qualified (in that my writing style needs polished and I possess bias) to edit the page, but i will provide information to. Also, a new logo is going in to effect in the beginning of April (stores are being given a transition time, but all stores will adopt the new logo within three years). I think the page should be updated to reflect this.--12.210.212.119 04:18, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
- I agree removed advert tag and removed biased advert from article. --Masterpedia 14:52, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
