Talk:SCR-270 radar

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I am contacting Don Helgeson by e-mail (and possibly by phone) to confirm that this text is indeed posted by him. From this webpage I concluded that the author of this article is indeed Don; it remains only to confirm that he is the poster as well, not someone who was ripping him off. Mikkalai 23:52, 4 May 2005 (UTC)

here are two more email addresses to try; [1], [2].--Duk 01:04, 5 May 2005 (UTC)

[edit] addishinal edditing required

the section on perl harbour if corect sould be copyed to the history of radar. in general this artical is missing sorces. if avalible please add some.--maayan 04:47, 12 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I am the Don Helgeson (donhelgeson@comcast.net - Gleaner&Scrounger for "Electrohist & RadarHist News Letters) that wrote the SCR-270 radar piece and it would be a iseful addition to the History of Radar article in my (addmittdly biased) estimation.

How do I get a Spell-Checker to work here?

Best Regards, DonH

[edit] rewrite needed and completed

Regardless of the identity of the original article, the article itself was inaccurate historically, misleading, needlessly technical and generally poorly writen. Hopefully this version corrects at least some of this. Maury 18:58, 23 December 2005 (UTC)

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