Talk:Steve Poizner

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[edit] Is this an article, or a power point slide

There are WAY too many bullet points. An article is made of sentences and paragraphs, not bullet points. Additionally, an article this short should not have 9 top level section headers. Gentgeen 07:45, 21 October 2006 (UTC)

Gentgeen,

Say if you can help, it would be appriciated. PEACE TalkAbout 18:23, 21 October 2006 (UTC)

There are various reasons I can't. I might be too close to the subject, and therefor unable to present a Neutral Point of View. Gentgeen 17:48, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

Done. The bullet points have been replaced with sentences and paragraphs, and the section headers are gone. OCNative 04:11, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Thanks, I have been waiting for someone that knew a little more about Mr. Poizner to help out. Any photos?PEACETalkAbout 04:18, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

I have put in some new section headers to maintain article clairty, without the excess number from before. OCNative 05:28, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

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