Talk:Sweatshop

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take a look at this: http://www.sweatshop.co.uk/ does this store have anything to do with the etymology of the term? or was the founder an oblivious idiot?

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I am a new user here, and I thought I could help out a little, I've written the initial entry about sweatshops. This has almost immediately been seriously improved by other volunteers :)

roan 12:59 Oct 10, 2002 (UTC)

We all have our talents. Those who cannot contribute original material often spellcheck, punctuate, copy-edit, link and so on. Cheers! --Ed Poor

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Question: the text now contains "pay their workers a living wage. ". Shouldn't this be "a decent living wage", or is my English not good enough? roan

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Oops: living wage, n. : A wage sufficient to provide minimally satisfactory living conditions. Also called minimum wage. roan

Contents 1 Edit 2 POV? 3 pro-sweatshop movement 4 Clean Up 5 Sweatshop picture 6 Wal-mart 7 Sweatshops and Slavery

[edit] Edit

Pranav don't be gay

I have removed the following paragraph for the time being. It uses a weasel term (recent studies) and should be substantiated with a reference before being re-added to the article.

In fact, recent studies demonstrate the power sweatshops have to raise wage levels and improve working conditions in the developing world; sweatshops actually provide workers with a better option than what would otherwise be available to them.

Also, if this paragraph is added, the counter-argument should be added, since many sweatshops fail to pay a living wage... There are many kinds of sweatshops out there... Kokiri 10:42, 11 Jul 2004 (UTC)

[edit] POV?

How was my edit POV? It was mostly just a rearrangement of what was already there plus the addition of them being in developing countries, which, as far as I know, is true. Ben davison 16:32, 2 October 2005 (UTC)

The original version gave purely factual information in the first sentence, and then added that it carries negative connotations in the second. Your edit simply stated those connotations as a clear-cut fact. Subtle, but POV. I've reviewed your changes and re-implimented some of the good ones, like the wikification of certain words. --Icarus 04:58, 3 October 2005 (UTC)

'Subtle'? So subtle that even I didn't notice! Just to confirm, I am not in the business of POVing articles on purpose. Hey ho, back to work...Ben davison 22:23, 3 October 2005 (UTC)

I figured it was probably unintentional. POV-pushers are usually anything but subtle! --Icarus 06:14, 4 October 2005 (UTC)

[edit] pro-sweatshop movement

• i like that this part is on the article. maybe it could move to be included with the criticism section, because really the explanation of this movement uses the market criticsism. maybe we could split this page into two sections, a pro-sweatshop and an anti-sweatshop. or something.

[edit] Clean Up

This article needs to cleaned up. It's been edited several times (I've added some needed material on the history of the prospect) but it still needs to have a better flow and more clarity.

True that. However, I don't see much chance of this article ever becoming NPOV. After all, the title itself is a pejorative, which gives the game away. - Nat Krause^(Talk!) 04:37, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

What would you prefer to call it? The name "sweat shop" would only be a pejorative if it weren't an accurate description. Same goes for "puppy mill," or "slaver." Exploding Boy 04:42, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

The article currently defines a sweatshop as "a factory in which people often work for a very small wage or doing piece work." I would call that either a "low-wage factory" or a "piece work factory". However, in the former case, it's still not a very good title, because we aren't given any context in which the wage is considered very small. - Nat Krause^(Talk!) 04:47, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

So it's a content problem, not a naming problem. It could be fixed by finding a better definition of "sweatshop" and rewriting the article accordingly. Exploding Boy 04:51, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

Yes, if the definition is wrong, that's the first thing that should be fixed. - Nat Krause^(Talk!) 05:07, 1 May 2006 (UTC)

Sweatshop was coined as a pejorative to describe the piecework factories of the pejoratively-named sweating system. I'll try to rework the opening. However, as of this date, this article seems entirely captive to the current campaigns against the garment sourcing practices of famous US brands, rather than an NPOV examination of the causes, history, and effects of sweatshops. I've fixed one specific ahistorical reference (to the Industrial Revolution, instead of the Second Industrial Revolution). Any cleanup should adress the ahistorical tone of the whole article. Please see the article on piece work for a historical treatment that maintains an NPOV (if I do say so myself). KevinCuddeback 15:31, 17 May 2006 (UTC)

I have undertaken a major reorganization and NPOV attempt. Please discuss here or have at it with your own edits. KevinCuddeback 18:55, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

I think the article is now approaching Wikipedia standards. If someone seconds that, I'd encourage them to remove the cleanup block.KevinCuddeback 13:31, 23 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Sweatshop picture

What's up with the sweatshop picture? I was expecting to see people SWEATING and being beaten. That looks better than the some of the place I've worked. RJII 07:25, 15 December 2005 (UTC)

Hey! I just found something. I've never added a photo before. I'm paranoid about copywright laws. -deadmissbates

[edit] Wal-mart

This article says that Wal-Mart is a major retailer of sweatshop products (at least, that what it implies). I saw a Radio Canada documentary which seemed to claim that Wal-Mart has a policy which precludes the sale of sweatshop products. Can anyone verify this? Srnec 22:47, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Sweatshops and Slavery

Someone's replaced the original text there with "Homo", or was the text initially there and this is just me? It looks suspicious at any rate. Thank you.

Chris.

It was just replaced again with all sorts of HTML gobbledegook. Fixed it. Ethan Mitchell 01:21, 27 April 2006 (UTC)

The "are sweatshops good or bad" discussion and its POV baggage seems to be creeping up into this section. I'm cutting it back out. Ethan Mitchell 01:28, 20 May 2006 (UTC)

Ethan, I think that the issue of sweatshops and slavery represents a decent transition from the definitional/historical part of the article to the pro/con part of the article. I think that it is fair to say that the abolitionist sentiment against sweatshops is both very old and yet recourse to "slavery" charges is too like recourse to "Hitler" comparisons (used to close discussions prematurely). As such, the Slavery issue has too much baggage to be addressed up in the History section, and yet too historical to be relegated down to the pro/con section. Whether you agree there or not, I think you have to agree that the article cannot be simply left with the strange fragment in this section, and the general linkage of sweatshops, human trafficking, and slavery has to be addressed somewhere here.KevinCuddeback 04:26, 20 May 2006 (UTC)

Why is that? There is no connection between the concepts of sweatshops and slavery. Salvor Hardin 06:54, 21 May 2006 (UTC)

I disagree. It seems to me that slavery is on the far end of a continuum of worker/"employer" relationships, on which sweatshop is toward that end but not quite as far as slavery. I am talking about sweatshops as a meaningful term, not the common usage where sweatshop is simply a pejorative the user invokes to condemn things of which he doesn't approve (for example, describing Silicon Valley employers as sweatshops because the person despises having to work 10-12 hours a day, no matter that they are working in an air-conditioned office and making a 6 figure income). Still, slavery should remain a minor part of the article, though not so minor as Salvor Hardin just made it ;~) Ehusman 15:45, 21 May 2006 (UTC)

Kevin, I think the new placement makes a good deal of sense. The point that I think is worth capturing (and I think it is watered down a bit here) is that sweatshops played an important role in the abolition movement's ultimate inability to come up with a working definition of slavery. They were one of several "limit cases" for labor exploitation, and arguably the most important one.

Salvor- I am aware of and am fairly sympathetic to the argument that sweatshops can be a positive force. There are also arguments that slavery can be a positive force. But those are all POVs. The fact is that the definitional boundary between slavery and certain kinds of 'voluntary' labor is in dispute, and always has been in dispute, and the article needs to reflect that. Ethan Mitchell 01:52, 22 May 2006 (UTC)

Folks, my personal POV is that sweatshops are a force for good when and if freely chosen, but I also believe that there are plenty of "employers" who are essentially using impressment and debt bondage to staff their sweatshops, and the free marketeer in me recoils from both the pro movement when it overlooks the (limited) cases of involuntary servitude, and the anti movement when they end up driving kids to prostitution and rock-crushing. It really had me wishing there was an entry on Free to Choose (the book), and not just Free Will. With that, I've just completed another stab at keeping all the slavery history (right down to informed consent) without having it in a separate section where it always seem to scream "Sweatshops are Slavery" no matter how it was written. It seems to me that it belongs as an underbelly caveat as the History section ends. I also worked it back in in the Anti-movement part. I also really like the way that Ehusman put it above. The anti-sweatshop movement has a rich and varied history that, I think, really helps explain what sweatshops are, what perceptions are, and why the whole subject is "important." KevinCuddeback 04:46, 22 May 2006 (UTC)

I'd say there are two types of people in the world: those who see the difference between an employee and a slave as an qualitative difference, and those who see it as purely quantitative. I'm afraid I'm not sure what the best way to express this in the article is. - Nat Krause^(Talk!) 06:59, 22 May 2006 (UTC)

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Greetings all. One glaring error on this page is in the following sentences:

"Defenders would cite purchasing power parity studies in defense of sweatshop wage levels. For example, the $0.15 that a Honduran worker might be paid to produce a designer-brand shirt, is comparable, in terms of purchasing power, to $3.00 in the United States."

This flatly not true. Using the purchasing power parity method, the $0.15 U.S. that a Honduran worker makes to produce the shirt would be equivalent in purchasing power terms to about $0.45 cents in the U.S., not anywhere near $3.00.