Talk:The Lives of John Lennon
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[edit] Biased, redundant text
. "...in spite of her litigious past history."
"past history" is redundant and incorrect; history is by nature in the past, or "passed" as it should be. Additionally, to say that Ono's history is litigious is an opinion. Perhaps replace it with a phrase the points out specifically that in the past, she has brought litigation against individuals who she alleged slandered or libeled her husband's legacy. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 63.69.213.41 (talk • contribs).
[edit] the teen prostitute claim
I removed the word "teen" from the prostitution claim on Yoko Ono. She was at least 20 by the time she is alleged to have been a prostitute. 12.96.162.45 17:27, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
