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[edit] Odd-eyed cat
I've recently written this article about odd-eyed cats and I would like to know what information needs to be added and how it can be improved. Thanks. --Candy-Panda 10:37, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
- You mention that they are popular among the Japanese, but that is the only cultural reaction you have. Is there any folklore in any countries about odd-eyed cats? Goldfritha 02:51, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
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- Excellent idea! I've now added a "cultural reactions and folklore" section. --Candy-Panda 04:32, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] A mcmurray
At a first glance:
- Cool concept, interesting. I added your intitial fact to the Did You Know nominations for the date of creation, Feb. 3. You'll have to cite that fact quickly as the article can only be 5 days old or less to be featured on DYK.
- Clean up the references section, check Wikipedia:Citing sources and these templates.
- Also may want to look at Wikipedia:Reliable sources.
My more thorough edit, changes, adds and removals (all of which are reversible per user discrimination):
- Add fact tag where applicable
- Inserted hidden comment(s) looking for more detail.
- Minor rewording of caption.
- Minor word removal, ex:perfectly contradicted by a stat right after it.
- Other minor copy editing details.
If interested I have an article up for peer review here. Hope that helps.A mcmurray 07:05, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
