Talk:Fox Chapel Area School District
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There isn't a teacher at this school not working for the best interests of their students. Thsi school provides the nourishment needed for acheivement in the outside, and I can truthfully say that I owe my life to this fine institution of learning. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Maxtor118 (talk • contribs) .
[edit] Wow!!!
Good Lord, this article is borderline fellatio. It is nothing but uncited praise and reads like an advertisement. There are even sections written in First Person! This article needs some serious work. "Country" Bushrod Washington 20:31, 20 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] That's Better
Okay . . . I know you guys like your school. But you cannot have the article as it was; it came across as nothing more than an advertisement, and more importantly, it was plagiarized word-for-word off of the school's website (given the claims of supposed prestige, I'd think you guys would know about plagiarism, not to mention spelling . . . ). Now, I think the revision as I've left it is fair, noting its recognition, and one of its more recent awards, but keeping the gratuitous claims of prestige to a minimum. If you guys want to add more, please provide a source, and make sure you don't plagiarize. "Country" Bushrod Washington 00:07, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] wow
i go to dorseyville middle school and the hs football team sucks--Irish rover 23:09, 19 October 2006 (UTC)
