Talk:Hadith of the Umrah of Sa'd
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[edit] Opening paragraph compromise
I suggest a compromise regarding the open paragraph of the article:
The hadith of the Umrah of Sa'd is the informal name used for the story of Sa'd ibn Mua'dh's pilgrimage to Mecca.
From the second sentence on it can follow as it is. That way the Manual of Style guidelines are maintained, the grammatic structure of the first sentence improves and the informality of the title is mentioned immediately, as it would be with a marker title of a poem, or something similar. LeaHazel : talk : contribs 06:47, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
