Talk:Harry Turtledove's Darkness
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[edit] POV & Soapboxing removed
I saw a few instances of one or more editor's personal POV and soapboxing in this otherwise very well written article and removed them. Jon 15:39, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Put Characters in a separate article?
This article is getting very long. Perhaps it would be best to split off the character details into a separate article and just leave a link to it here?Lisiate 23:48, 17 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] subjectivity
The statement, "Though the reader would later forget it, the first of many women in the series to get raped by invading soldiers is an Algarvian raped by a Kaunian (Jelgavan) officer, and the reader's sympathy is wholly with her and the revenge she exacts," along with other portions of the article, seems somewhat subjective. I am removing the first clause. --Amanaplanacanalpanama 05:09, 20 August 2006 (UTC)
Also, I'm not convinced that this article isn't largely the original interperitation of an editor. --Amanaplanacanalpanama 05:13, 20 August 2006 (UTC)