Talk:Jain Irrigation Systems
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This article was nominated for deletion on January 13, 2007. The result of the discussion was keep. |
This page is intended to give info about an organisation working for agriculture & farmers, not an ad. material, If you wish, you can contribute or suggest changes. You can see page microsoft for contribute. Need more contribution for references and news etc. Thanks.
- I do suggest you remove sentences like "making us the largest single producer of PVC Pipes in the country" and "We have set ourselves a goal `to become a major and reliable global supplier of food ingredients of finest quality.’" because it sounds like marketing/advertising talk. Articles on Wikipedia needs to be neutral. I will add a tag for neutrality, please leave it on the page until you have made the necessary changes to the page. - TexMurphy 13:52, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Cleanup
I cleaned up the article some today to try and give it a fair shot at survival. To summarize the changes, the intro was rewritten (and shortened a bit), the products area was removed (it read too much like an advert and added little of encyclopedic value), and a few external links were removed. I didn't touch the history section much, since it would it would be a larger investment in time in an article that may end up deleted anyway — but at least it's tagged as a section which needs work in the future.
Since I know very little about this company (and am writing from a foreign POV), I'm hoping that I didn't make any misleading or otherwise erroneous changes here. If the article passes AfD, it'd be helpful to have someone with more familiarity look over things and take a shot at cleaning up the rest of it. Tijuana Brass 10:08, 15 January 2007 (UTC)
