Talk:Jean-Marc XO Vodka
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I wrote a heading a few hours ago, and made the mistake of not writing a fuller article. I have now written a fuller article that is as detailed as many of the other vodka pages. What is the problem?
Alanmoss 20:25, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
I have tried to model this page on other vodka pages, for example Belvedere. I will be pleased to adapt and would be grateful for any comments as to what is of special concern. Thanks.
Alanmoss 20:29, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
Try to stay a neutral point of view, establish notability, etc. I changed the speedy to a prod, which means you have 5 days to improve the deletion. I'll keep an eye on the article and will be willing to help you out. Yanksox 20:32, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
Thanks! I'll certainly make it more neutral, but it's a great vodka: see the review (which establishes notability, doesn't it?). Can you have a look later tonight or maybe Saturday? Alanmoss 20:38, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
- P Well, you do have something at the bottom which helps to establish that. I'll take a look every now and then. Remember: Cite your sources![1] Yanksox 20:40, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
Two external documents backing up my comments. Have I done this correctly? Alanmoss 20:57, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
Yes, I'm going to play around with it a little. You can also cite the source by selecting a passage and [place your link here]. Yanksox 21:00, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
Thanks. I'll study how you do it, so that I can learn! Alanmoss 21:01, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
lol, I'm not really an expert. :P I actually went over the article and it's pretty solid to begin with. I just did some minor edits, but it's decent. Yanksox 21:08, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
Edited your edit: put the reference in the right place. At what stage, does this page lose its may require "clean-up" status? Alanmoss 21:13, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
The reason I had the reference there was to prove that fact, but as long as it's on the page, it's cool. The cleanup tag is more of a thing that I see. The middle section seems somewhat jarred, but this article is much better than what it originally was. You did a good job! Yanksox 21:17, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
