Talk:John Colepeper, 1st Baron Colepeper
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[edit] WP:MILHIST Assessment
Overall, a good article of good length and detail. I think the intro could use a little work - outside of being a politician and the son of so-and-so, why is he significant? What is he known for? If I learn only one thing about Colepeper from this article, what should it be? Then, just add a section break to split the intro off from the main text, and you're done changing this from a Start article to a promising candidate for B-class status. LordAmeth 00:09, 29 October 2006 (UTC)