Talk:July Revolution

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I cut out a fair bit of stuff, some of it was factually wrong other parts were analysis that probably does not belong in a wikipedia article. -SimonP 01:25, Oct 7, 2003 (UTC)

Isn't this the same as the July Revolution? Adam Bishop 01:27, 7 Oct 2003 (UTC)

Yes it is, unfortunately - SimonP 03:25, Oct 7, 2003 (UTC)

Most links are to July Revolution, so this article should be moved to that. Den fjättrade ankan 03:48, 24 Dec 2003 (UTC)

Um, "Although more than 700 European countries attended..." 700??? D.E. Cottrell 00:22, 26 Mar 2004 (UTC)

My comment would be that this reads as if it's a very poor translation from French. It's really badly written. (User, Mike Friedman, San Francsico, USA, June 29, 2005)

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"3 glorious days"? Which 3? Dates might be nice... Trekphiler 10:42, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

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Based on the comments above, I wonder if I should have looked more closely at the language... I hope these issues have been resolved. Meanwhile, the article also lacks references and a military conflict infobox. If applicable, sections for See Also and/or External Links might be nice too. Though I really like the pictures. LordAmeth 07:59, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Disambiguation

July revolution is the same name used for 1952 Revolution in Egypt. We might need a disambiguation page. --TheEgyptian 18:58, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

No, this is the primary topic. Put a {{For}} at the top. –EdC 17:48, 11 March 2007 (UTC)

There seems to be some discrepancy regarding the dates. After talking about Charles X's ascension on September 1824, the article goes on to discuss the events leading upto the 1830 revolution. The interval appears to be treated as 8 months instead of 6 years. Please read the section Charles X's reign and see if it fits or not.