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"former head coach Rick Carlisle, who was replaced by Larry Brown despite winning 50 games and consecutive playoff appearances in those seasons." is this POV? orthogonal 17:57, 16 Nov 2003 (UTC)
- It might be a tad POV. I don't understand the sentence, is it Rick Carlisle or Kevin O'Neill who had "50 [winning]] games and consecutive playoff appearances"? If it's about Rick Carlisle then it shouldn't even be in this article. Anyway, it could just be said as "replaced by Larry Brown". Dori 18:02, Nov 16, 2003 (UTC)
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- There should be a comma after "Brown"; as I read it, it's Carlisle who won 50 games, etc. orthogonal 20:43, 16 Nov 2003 (UTC)
