Talk:Lise Simms
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[edit] Southern, Colorado
The article originally said she grew up in "Southern, Colorado", but I cannot find any reference to a town named Southern in Colorado on Wikipedia or on the Web. Thus, I'm assuming it should be southern Colorado. If someone can verify the existance of this town, please change it back. -- Zawersh 03:50, 16 May 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Fan page?
Right now the article reads more like a fan page than an encyclopedia article. The information on her family (on down to their current jobs) is way more information than is appropriate for an article; I'm sure they're very nice people, but it appears they're non-notable from the Wikipedia standpoint. (I've been a middle-school Spanish teacher myself, so I'm certainly not putting down her brother! :) The section on her work sounds like material from a press release (e.g., "starred in countless plays" — she's young enough that one definitely can count them). Then there's the list of personal information that sounds straight out of IMDb or her agent's press kit. Don't get me wrong ... she belongs in Wikipedia. We just need to clean up the article. Lawikitejana 20:36, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
- Done. Removed the "personal information" section, reformatted headings so information is grouped, took out info on father's and brother's professions for now (if either is independently notable, put 'em back), and did a slight rewrite of the work sections for more encyclopedic tone and better flow. Lawikitejana 20:55, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
