Talk:Marshall Wittmann
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Changed article to NPOV. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Dyre42 (talk • contribs) .
[edit] Various issues
Okay, the guy has five decades in politics, and almost everything is from the last two years. Surely there's more to be said about his early career and something should be in there about his youthful Communism -- the guy has really been all over the map. Additionally, the section on his politics as it stands is not just incomplete but has a confused chronology. Finally, the article needs more sources, as it relies heavily on links to his blog, when he's clearly received mainstream coverage that could be used to buttress claims. I cleanup up some of the most POV language, but there are still some things that shouldn't be said without a citation. --Dhartung | Talk 19:09, 5 September 2006 (UTC)
Is the guy's name Wittmann or Wittman? He's called Wittmann in the heading and Wittman throughout the article. Bachaumont 02:11, 15 December 2006 (UTC)
