Talk:Muskogee, Oklahoma
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[edit] He built...
Comparing versions as far back as it will let me there appears to be a fragment of a sentence. At one point in the History section it just says "He built" and has nothing after it until the next paragraph where it appears to pick back up with a new set of sentences about the man. I have no idea what's attempting to be conveyed, but perhaps that should be deleted or filled in. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 129.244.130.126 (talk) 09:01, 11 December 2006 (UTC).
- I fixed the sentence fragment you noted and did some minor edits to remove the promotional tourist-bureau tone of some of the text. Also broke long history into two headings, shifted prominent residents to a single section, and shifted demographic narrative out of history down to the demographic section. The article still lacks an explanation of why the Muskogee name was chosen (part of the heritage of the transplanted Creek nation, but I don't have the resources on hand to do a good, well-cited explanation). -- Lisasmall 11:12, 15 January 2007 (UTC)
