Talk:MyBlackBook

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What would be the formal tone for an entry? This is an informational - educational entry. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 69.142.198.103 (talk • contribs) 06:19, 25 July 2006.

It reads a little bit too much like an advertisement. I fixed some of this when I did some cleanup and formatting, but it's not completely resolved. For example, VDNote is just one of the many other features that MyBlackBook has to offer which also includes features including charts, graphs, and reports. is something I'd expect to see in an ad or a press release. It seems like the primary (perhaps only) source of information is someone personally involved with the website, and not a neutral and independent source. A corollary of this is that there is currently no information demonstrating the notability of this website. This last issue is the most time-sensitive concern, as it's the one that could be considered grounds for deletion if not corrected. --Icarus ^(Hi!) 19:22, 25 July 2006 (UTC)