Talk:Pacific Proving Grounds
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A very nice start, but I wonder if there's anything to be done about the choppy nature of the article, which reads more like bullet-points on a timeline than cohesive paragraphs. Admittedly, just about any content that could be added is already (presumably) well covered in other articles, such as Nuclear weapons and the United States. Nevertheless, the overall aesthetic of the article on the page feels off to me. LordAmeth 15:10, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
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