Wikipedia:Peer review/Gaffney High School
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[edit] Gaffney High School
This page should be reviewed to be expanded. Admins say that the lists must also be put into prose writing. Someone help me because I cannot do it by myself. This is my hgih school so please help me do make it look good.--DvDknight 16:18, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
- Suggestions
- Merge the "Mission" and "Facts" sections into one section called "Overview"
- Rename "Outstanding features/programs" to "School Programs," possibly transfer it from list form to a different, smaller, more descriptive form.
- Renamed, but it still is a list. Rjgodoy 01:11, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
- Merge "Awards/achievements" with "Academic achievements"
- Merge "Extracurricular activities" with "School Programs"
- Wikify "Business partners partnerships and sponsors," rename section to "Business Sponsors"
- Rename "Other" to "See Also"
- Add references.
— JuWiki (Talk <> Resources) 23:22, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
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- I rearranged the article according to some of the suggestions stated above (I just moved sections/subsection, no actual content was modified). Rjgodoy 01:11, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
- One more suggestion - get rid of the long lists. — JuWiki (Talk <> Resources) 20:25, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
- I put {{cleanup-laundry}} template. It had been reverted before —no reason given— in revision as of 2007-03-31T16:13:52 [1]. I think it explicits the problem on the right place. Rjgodoy 00:59, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
