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[edit] SkyTrain (Vancouver)
This article has had a lot of work done to it. Most of the information is there, but there might be some key points missing. I have done a bit of work to get it to confirm WP:MOS, but may have missed a few things. -- Selmo 00:54, 14 August 2006 (UTC)
Some suggestions:
- Main suggestion: the article would need a history section. If I remember right, it has an interesting one, with local politics and NDP playing a large part.
- The impact on the city should also be emphased and documented.
- Detail/link/explain automated train.
- Sky Tour shouldn't be a heading/section. It's a two sentence, semi-commercial information.
- Design would go to a history section. Dig up the construction companies involved too.
- The trivia can easily be incorporated in the article.
- Some of the external links can be incorporated in the article as references.
- The references section should be placed before the external links.
- There are still some inline external links, all should be coverted to references.
--Qyd 15:47, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
