Talk:Pin Drop Violence
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The introduction needs to be rewritten. In its current form, it is far from objective and neutral. It reeks of fanyboy worship and there are too many trivial details that have been described in a bombastic way.
I agree. Have cleaned it up as best as I could, but left the introduction untouched. Also tagged the article for cleanup. Pdinc 12:26, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
I've gone ahead and taken most of the introduction out. All of it looked like it belonged on the group's webpage or on liner notes. The page is far too thin now, but it's a better starting point than a PR piece.
The Achievement thingy does look fanboyish, but is kinda essential considering how nascent the Indian Metal scene is. Extracted C..O..D and RIIR from the 'Assorted Achievements' list. Adding pics now. The topic does look a lot neutral now, doesn't it ? --An@vrin 16:52, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
