Talk:Plato's Problem
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The creation of this page is a group project of Dr. Kent Norman's Spring semester 2006 course, Thinking and Problem Solving, at the University of Maryland, College Park.
[edit] Comments
Way to wordy, reads like an essay. The intention of an encyclopaedia is to give an overview of each subject. Extended rhetoric examinations rarely pass muster. I am saying this all due respect to the author, who obviously is an accomplished wordsmith. -- Cimon avaro; on a pogostick. 02:26, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
Well, I have to agree that on reading this article it could in fact be much shorter. It is good and well written and I will give you credit for that. But it covers material that should be or is in other articles in philosophy and psychology. Probably what you should do, is either peel off material to start other articles that you will refer to or at the end of the semester reduce the article to a brief overview. Your full contribution will be in history of the article --User:Klnorman
Also, I think that you need to explain the problem or the definition a little more at the beginning. It is too vague. I don't think that anyone will get on the first reading. For the References, use italics rather than underlining. --User:Klnorman
[edit] Final Comments 10 May 2006
Well done. The article reads well and is well organized and documented. Now it just remains to be seen whether it stays or is divided up, etc. Total points for the Group portion = 48/50. --User:Klnorman
