Talk:Relentless (drink)

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1 Cleared
2 minardi
3 Adamshappy
4 Wikified
5 Nutrition and citing

[edit] Cleared

I have cleared this page up, added a picture and details. Hope you like it! jimmy93211 june 1st

Needs more detail, maybe some nutrition stuff or something. Minardi

[edit] minardi

why do you feel my version should be revised to the previous one? it is a quite obvious advertisment, with repitition and weasel words. For example, why Relentless is 'better' than red bull is mentioned about 4 times. do you work for Coca Cola? Adamshappy 00:12, 19 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Adamshappy

Dude, at the time I didn't have the time to re-write the article but felt you were trimming too many facts out. Ive now had a little go at it and it seems to contain the facts but without slapping you in the face and telling you its better than red bull. Hope this is wikified. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Minardi (talk • contribs) .

[edit] Wikified

I've wikified this entry a bit, added a few links, re-worded a few sentences. Citations are still needed. JubalHarshaw 22:13, 26 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Nutrition and citing

As of about now, I'm going to be spending a bit of time rewording, and I've also found a few sources. I will put in a few facts now, as well as nutritional information.~CortalYX^Talk? 14:59, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

Have placed in sources, cited them, changed the class of the article as I think it meets start class criteria, in addition to finding an appropriate infobox, and placing more nutritional info. I do think that maybe the nutritional info could perhaps go in a separate section now though - the coca cola varieties box has also been placed in... although I don't know if it is the most appropriate template. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by CortalYX (talk • contribs) 15:41, 28 March 2007 (UTC).

Am changing the country of origin, as I've noticed it still says United States... I think it's the UK, correct as necessary~CortalYX^Talk? 15:48, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

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