Talk:Royal Belfast Academical Institution

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[edit] Staff

Is there any need to mention virtually every member of staff? Table tennis coach?! Stu 16:54, 3 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Incorrect terms.

RBAI IS a state school, it recives plenty of state funds. Do not say 'Ireland', the school has never been in the Republic of Ireland, it has alwas been on the same spot in collage square east in Belfast. the correct way of saying it is Northern Ireland and abroad as they do take part in competitions abroad (i.e. the Republic of Ireland).

>Have to disagree - For a start, Wikipedia defines [Ireland] As the "island of Ireland" - not simply as the republic of ireland, and specifically, some sports competitions are ireland wide, just like the Irish Rugby Team. As an example, Swim Ireland covers the whole island, not just Northern Ireland. The heats are based in the four provinces, ie, the nine counties of Ulster for us, and then the finals cover all of Ireland. Therefore, it is not an "Incorrect Term" to say that the swimming team came first in "Ireland", in fact, any other term would in fact be incorrect.

[edit] Victoria Cross

I recall from memory that the school has an old boy who received the Victoria Cross. Indeed it is referred to on the school website. If coorect, and anyone has the supporting detail, it warrants inclusion in the Alumni section. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 193.32.3.83 (talk) 17:20, 17 January 2007 (UTC).

[edit] Peer Review

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