Talk:Serenity (film)/to do
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A few thoughts for you guy's FA campaign
Expand for a three paragraph lead- Expand Production section if able
Compress Synopsis section more if able- Expand or divide one paragraph sections (minimum of two paragraphs)
- Cite sources in influences section
Good luck. The Filmaker 21:27, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 22:53, 18 December 2006 (UTC)
