Talk:SouthWest Service
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[edit] edits to discussion of Route 835
This section needs some editing. I propose to clean it up by turning long run-on and compound sentences into shorter sentences. I've already committed minor changes but would like the article to be cleaner. MKoltnow 01:46, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
- I've committed some additional edits. Pace 835 does not stop exactly at the train stations, so I recast the sentence which implied that it did. I don't think I changed the content of the discussion regarding the bus public hearings on its elimination, but I think readability is greatly improved. MKoltnow 16:05, 13 November 2006 (UTC)