Talk:Starlight Starbright Children's Foundation
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The foundation is actually notable and does good work, but this article needs a total re-write. It reads like PR copy, and isn't encyclopedic at all in its current form. Whoever is working on it, please check the help pages on Wikipedia for instructions on what makes a good article. TheQuandry 15:07, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
- I agree completetly Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! (Whisper...) 15:11, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
The article now includes more information about its services as well as the locations it serves.
[edit] What country?
I don't even know what country this thing operates in - rather basic! Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! (Whisper...) 07:35, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
- The Foundation's headquarters are located in Los Angeles, Calif., with offices located throughout the United States as well as internationally. This information has been added to the foundation's article.
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- Good to see this added now - a rather basic piece of information that was missing! Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! (Whisper...) 05:37, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Foundation
Comments like "It has been in existence for more than two decades" are not helpful - if this article still says this in ten year's time it becomes meaningless - can we be more specific? Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp ! (Whisper...) 05:41, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
Information is more specific now
