Talk:The Mantle
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[edit] POV
This article currently reads as a personal album review. It clearly deviates from the NPOV policy of Wikipedia. --:bloodofox: 20:52, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
I agree, the part "The overall feeling on this album is one of eeriness. One could also liken the experience to wandering into a snowy forest. " seems too personal for me.Ptikobj 20:38, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
- If you really feel this is too subjective, it's up to you to remove or change it. I'm not current with the guidelines for album articles and when I wrote the piece I thought I'd share comments I've heard often about The Mantle. Bobsky 15:28, 23 April 2006 (UTC)
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- Since no one is challenging the point of view or changing the article, I removed the warning. Bobsky 03:38, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
- I've gone through the article and snipped all sections I can tell that are obviously violating the NPOV policy and stuck a tag where a reference needs to be cited. This isn't a place for writing reviews. :bloodofox: 09:38, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
- Since no one is challenging the point of view or changing the article, I removed the warning. Bobsky 03:38, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] The Hawthorne Passage
The sample from the song The Hawthorne Passage is actually from the movie "Fando y Lis" of Alejandro Jodorowsky. There was also a small mistake in the quote, so I fixed it and the translation which also had some small mistakes. Ptikobj 20:46, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
- I don't agree with the changes you made to my translation. This makes no sense:
I will die and no one will remember about me. About me...
- You don't remember about people, you just remember them. Bobsky 15:38, 23 April 2006 (UTC)
