Talk:Tokyo DisneySea
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This page should be cleaned up, along with the "ports of call". Some are done but half finished. Any photos should be added to show the park, as it is the 2nd most visited park in the world. More information is available about the park, including development.--Randomgbear 05:37, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
[edit] cleanup and pov flags removed
I just removed the cleanup and pov flags that had been added to the article. I didn't see any reason for them, and the person who added them provided no explanation of why they were added.
If you want to add them back, please do so, but also please provide some indication of what it is about the article that justifies doing so. Thanks. -- John Callender 17:11, 16 April 2006 (UTC)
- I've re-added one. Please see the articles on peacock words and weasel words for more information if you are uncertain what is wrong with the article.
- This:
- "It is the only Disney hotel located inside a Disney theme park; in contrast, the Grand Californian Hotel at Disneyland Resort in Anaheim, California merely faces the park Disney's California Adventure."
- is not of any encyclopedic value.
- This:
- "Follow in the footsteps of Dr. Indiana Jones in a harrowing, life-or-death quest for the legendary Fountain of Youth."
- is written in the wrong person. Wikipedia is not a travel guide.
- It further gushes with peacock terms such as "popular", "merely", "complements" and "beautiful" and is generally flowery. It also does not cite sources and is generally unverifiable. SergioGeorgini 00:11, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
