Talk:Tome H. Walters Jr.
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Any particular reason "JR." is capitalized in the page title but not in the text? I believe the typical capitalization is "Jr." Nkocharh 06:16, 9 April 2006 (UTC)
It appears to be because of the page the information was taken from (here), so I've renamed the article. Nkocharh 06:21, 9 April 2006 (UTC)
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A nice start, but I think the introduction could afford to be a bit more explicit about when he lived and which conflicts he was involved in. Right now, the information's there, but it seems kind of buried. More importantly, the rest of the article, while quite detailed, is not prose. There should be a more paragraph-style "life and career" sort of section. LordAmeth 20:45, 30 October 2006 (UTC)
