Talk:Toyota War

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The article Technical (fighting vehicle) seems related, but I couldn't find a decent place to link to it. Recury 18:13, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA on hold

I have assessed the article according to the GA criteria. Please fix the following suggestions and I'll pass the article:

1. Inline citations go directly after the punctuation, be sure to fix them all.

1. Done. - Francis Tyers · 08:49, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

1. Add wikilinks for: ceasefire (intro), mine fields (Libyan expulsion),

   Done. - Francis Tyers · 08:51, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

2. Consider rewording "Behind this appearance of strength, weaknesses manifested themselves."
3. "Against these, Hassan Djamous, the thirty-year-old head of the FANT, commanded 4,000–5,000 troops." Don't use "Against these", elaborate more. Also add an inline citation for the statement.
4. "The unexpected defeat stunned Gaddafi; he reacted on January 4 by recalling to service all the army reservists and, in an act of defiance, bombing civilians in Arada, south of the 16th parallel, an action to which France answered with a second airstrike on Ouadi Doum in February 1986, destroying the radar system, which blinded the Libyan Air Force in Chad for months." That's one long sentence! Try splitting it into two and rewording.
5. "Observers estimated that, in the Chadian victories in the first three months of 1987, more than 3,000 Libyan soldiers had been killed or captured or had deserted." Change the last part of the sentence to "had been killed, captured, or had deserted".
6. In the third paragraph of the Libyan expulsion section, mine fields is spelled two different ways (one with a space, one without); choose the right one.
7. "In an attempt to save his prestige," Don't use this phrasing, it may be construed as POV. Same for "Anxious to highlight the victory, Gaddafi flew foreign journalists to the region, so they could report his success."
8. Wikilink full dates such as September 5, 1987.

   I can't seem to see any that aren't linked. Is this still a problem? - Francis Tyers · 08:54, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

Add inline citations for:

1. The Toyota War attracted considerable interest in the United States, where the possibility of using Habré to overthrow Gaddafi was given serious consideration.
2. It was assumed that war would, sooner of later, resume.

Altogether, a broad article with excellent use of images with just some minor formatting issues. Fix the above suggestions and add the inline citations within seven days and I'll pass the article. Good work so far, and when you're done or if you have any questions, please let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. --Nehrams2020 07:49, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

Should be all done now.--Aldux 18:03, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] A few more things

1. "Hassan Djamous, the thirty-year-old FANT commander-in-chief, pitched against the Libyan garison 4,000–5,000 troops." Garison is misspelled (garrison), and add "of" right after it.

Done.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

1. "The unexpected defeat stunned Gaddafi, that reacted on January 4 by recalling to service all the army reservists. In an act of defiance towards France he also ordered the bombing of Arada, well south of the 16th parallel; France answered with a new airstrike on Ouadi Doum, destroying their radar system, thus effectively blinding the Libyan Air Force in Chad for months." This still needs to be reworded better. Perhaps: "The unexpected defeat stunned Gaddafi, who then reacted on January 4 by recalling to service all of the army reservists. In an act of defiance towards France, he also ordered the bombing of Arada, well south of the 16th parallel. France retaliated with a new airstrike on Ouadi Doum and destroyed their radar system, effectively blinding the Libyan Air Force in Chad for several months."

Done.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

1. September 5, 1987 in the Renewed Chadian offensive section is the one I noticed that should be wikilinked.

Isn't it linked? Hope it's OK now.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

1. The inline citation still needs to be moved in "Instead, while there were minor violations of the ceasefire" (Ceasefire section)

I'm not sure I've understood exactly what you mean here. Anyways, I've rewritten it. The inline citation is there, number 25.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

There are a few things that were not fully completed, so fix the above and again let me know when you're done and I'll pass it. Good work so far. --Nehrams2020 23:36, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA passed

I have passed this article according to the GA criteria. You have addressed all of the above suggestions, but please continue to look over the article and determine how the article can continue to be expanded with sourced information. Keep up the good work and consider a peer review and then taking it to FAC. If you have the time, please review an article or two at GAC to help eliminate the backlog. --Nehrams2020 23:22, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

That's great. Congrats Aldux. Picaroon 23:35, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Thanks Picaroon for all your help. Without BT, Fran and your's help this article would never had done it!--Aldux 16:08, 25 March 2007 (UTC)