Talk:Valéry Grancher
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[edit] Questionable sources
The article has been created by the artist who is the object of the article (or at least a wikipedia user named "Vgrancher"), and all the listed references point to the artists webpage, and to a book he published. Therefore this page could need a tag indicating the lack of "objective" and "neutral" critical litterature, which would sustain the claims of being the "first" this and that... Also, the list of exhibitions is still invertly proportional to the artists historical importance. BTW a look at the user's contribs shows that he inserted Valery Grancher prominently on the Internet art page among the founding names of net.art, a claim which is not supported by any secondary litterature i would know of. 83.180.104.174 01:58, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] POV and Cleanup rationales
- Article is not Neutral-POV, several sentences in opening paragraphs.
- Lists use BR html tags instead of Wiki syntax for lists.
- Article needs general language/wording/spelling/grammar cleanup.
- Some internal html links need converting into references, some already have been.
— Wackymacs 20:38, 7 February 2006 (UTC)
