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Contents 1 balance 2 Japanese advance through Burma to the Indian frontier 3 50K is to big for an article 4 The Allied retreat 5 References 6 Word Count 7 This page is a disgrace 8 This page is still a disgrace

[edit] balance

This article is somewhat unbalanced I think, being mostly centered upon the Allied side. More information is needed on the Japanese side. Who were their commanders, which forces took part, what were the Japanese objectives, ect. Fornadan (t) 19:13, 29 July 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Japanese advance through Burma to the Indian frontier

We should add some date information in this section. Philip Baird Shearer

Maps and pictures also. This article has lots of text and no visual references. Wiki-Ed 16:10, 15 September 2005 (UTC)

[edit] 50K is to big for an article

I think that this article is now a good overview of the campaign. But it is now 50K in length so how do go about cutting it down to a maximum of 32K? I would not want to loose information, so I guess it involves moving information into other articles. We could for example take the major subsections and move them into new articles. eg:

• Burma Campaign command structure
• Burma Campaign initial Japanese successes
• Burma Campaign the turning point

Has anyone any other ideas? -- Philip Baird Shearer 14:56, 4 October 2005 (UTC)

Some:

• The section on the Central Front 1943-1944 duplicates much information already available in separate articles on the battles of Imphal and Kohima.
• Much of the information on events on the Northern Front 1943-1944 are also available in an article on Northern Combat Area Command (which could be extended to cover the period 1944-1945).
• Another section which coulld be spun off into a separate article are the joint battles of Meiktila and Mandalay (Central Front 1944-1945).

This ought to save you 10Kb or so. HLGallon 12:39, 5 October 2005 (UTC)

I am not sure about putting campaign details into NCAC as I think it should be about the command, more of an article like SEAC. Perhapse information from both articles could be moved into China Burma India Theater of World War II. Philip Baird Shearer 17:52, 5 October 2005 (UTC)

I would break the article up with separate linked pages on each campaign or battle with its own summary orbat maps pics etc. with only a summary mention of the campaign or battle with a link in this page. Look at the Second Sino-Japanese War page. Maybe use its Campaignbox Second Sino-Japanese War as a model listing the various battles and campaigns. That could colapse this page size pretty well but allow more info overall.Asiaticus 03:50, 15 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] The Allied retreat

During the period of British rule over Burma, Indians had emigrated to Burma in large numbers, where most ran small businesses or industries, or gained land through moneylending, antagonising the majority Burman population. As they fled, many of these destitute refugees were preyed upon by dacoits (armed bandits) or Burmese nationalist bands. Some Chinese communities in Burma also fled. This flight permanently changed the racial mix of Burma.

Has anyone got a source for this? --Philip Baird Shearer 22:28, 3 December 2005 (UTC)

Any history of Burma that covers the early 20th century.

[edit] References

This article's bibliography has been done terribly, I must say. Perhaps the original editors who included the references could rewrite them as per WP:CITE? --Loopy ^e 00:41, 29 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Word Count

IT's about 7500 words. Far, far, far too long. How about trimming it down to a year-by-year summary, with a list of major battles? Guapovia 11:34, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] This page is a disgrace

The page should be retitled: Burma Campaign - A tribute to the god-like greatness of General Slim. The page is unbalanced, depends far too heavily on certain "easy" sources (i.e. slim), is (or was) was too POV in taking the British/American side with regard to disputes with the Chinese. Its also way too long. It should be reduced to a summary of the campaign. Half of the page should be thrown away or moved to other pages. You can start with the lengthy (and worthless) dissertation on the command structure.

The hero-worship of Slim, if nothing else has to go. You do not put into a section "Defeat Into Victory by Field Marshal William Slim is the definitive account of the Burma campaign." Thats a distorted and biased opinion. It has no place on the page. Neither does the page's tendancy to take whatever Slim says as utter untouchable truth no matter how biased (or even wrong) what he says is. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 168.127.0.51 (talk • contribs) 00:37, 24 March 2006 (UTC)

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You are of course entitled to you POV but please read Wikipedia:Verifiability before you make large chages to this page. --Philip Baird Shearer 01:12, 24 March 2006 (UTC)

Mr. Shearer. I am quite familiar with Wikipedia. The content and material as presented on this page is in serious need of correction. Large changes were required because large amounts of material on the page are either wrong, biased or have been written in pursuit of goals that have nothing to do with the subject of the page. If you wish to help in the effort to rewrite the page, please do so in a productive way rather than displaying your own ignorance as to the subject matter. As time allows, I hope to improve the page by adding a reasonable list of books and other sources. I will tell you however that the previous insulting and unfair material on the page as concerns the Chinese army will not be coming back. If you are unfamiliar with Stilwell and his attitude toward both the British and the Chinese, there are any number of books or even the words of the man himself that should more than clarify. If you are unfamilar with pre-war military planning in Burma, I can suggest you start with either the British official history of the war or the history of the indian army in the second world war that deals with the fall of Burma.168.127.0.52 21:34, 24 March 2006 (UTC)

Please do not supply sources here please supply sources for the points below in the article. BTW I am familiar with vinegar Joe's attitudes. But "respect" has to be earned had the British or the Chinese done anything to earn Stillwell's respect? --Philip Baird Shearer 09:29, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

With the chages you have made to date:

• It was never expected that the Japanese would invade Burma. What is the source for this statment?
• The British authorities gave no consideration to adding to the defense of Burma based on these policies. What is the source for this statment?
• (Stilwell) was ill-tempered and lacked respect for either the British or the Chinese. Source for "lacked respect"?
• From the Chinese perspective, the Americans and the British were trying to take over command of the Chinese armies to use them for their own purposes. In retrospect, much of the criticism directed at Chaing and the performance of the Chinese Army in 1942 seems unfair considering the series of disasterous command decisions on the British side such as the whole incident at the Sittang Bridge. The ability of many of the other Chinese commanders was called into question though the enormous sarifices the Chinese troops made allowed the British to retreat to India. What is the source for this statment?

--Philip Baird Shearer 01:38, 24 March 2006 (UTC)

I've also felt that this article have been imbalanced, perhaps not so much bias but in focus. I've just never found the time and will to do something with it. Regarding Chiang, this article used to plainly call him a bad strategist, now it's been moved too far in the other direction. Can't give any quotes just now, but the accounts I've read agree that Chiang considered the war with Japan secondary to the upcoming struggle with the Communists. He therefore felt no particular need to attrit his forces to help reconquer Burma. Fornadan (t) 01:47, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

His main war may or may not have been against the Japanese, but who ever he was fighting, having the Burma road open for resupply was clearly to his stratigic advantage. --Philip Baird Shearer 09:20, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] This page is still a disgrace

Obviously there's been a debate and some alterations but this page clearly now been edited too far. Slim seems to get just one mention whereas Stiwell and Wingate now are credited with all the glory - the most important commander in the theatre was Slim, Slim was the one who turned an army in retreat into a cohesive whole that dealt the Japanese the fatal blows - to argue otherwise is to distort history.

Merrill's Maruaders (despite their catchy name) were a relatively small force and their impact on the campaign was minor - from the article as it's written they appear to have won the camapign on their own. The RAF contribution again seems to be down-played in favour of another catchy name force.

Burma was a victory for 14th Army with support from the Chinese and a few Americans. This was mainly down to Slim's remarkable effort and impact.

Please revise this page and give credit where it is due

Thanks

(PS Slim - The Standardbearer, Ronald Lewin, Leo Cooper, London 1976 may help in redressing the current imbalance) -- —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 83.67.126.86 (talk • contribs) 12:14, 7 September 2006 (UTC)