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Contents 1 Improvement drive 2 Original rewrite 3 Evolution section 4 Species 5 Top Page 6 Borderline carnivores 7 Popular culture 8 Soil for carnivorous plants 9 Great article 10 Evolution? 11 Carnivorous plants in the News 12 Biggest animal eaten by a plant? 13 Links 14 Fault 15 Text interruptions 16 Drosera image 17 Missing Links 18 Ecology and modelling of carnivory

[edit] Improvement drive

I was just tempted to revert 250,000 to 250 000 (as I originally had it, since 250,000 means 250.000 in most of Europe), but then thought, why bother? This'll sound like a troll, but FFS, an arguable comma is not what this article needs (nor most of the other micro-changes that have been made since I originally wrote it). It needs the following, if anyone can be bothered (and I'm afraid I haven't the time):

• Better referencing and footnotes, along the lines of the ones in all the recent featured articles.
• Better linking to the reams of other carnivorous plant category articles (including all the new Nepenthes ones that NepGrower has kindly created).
• The evolution and modelling sections are really dry and could do with some relevant images adding from Wikimedia Commons.
• The pop-culture sections is a boring list, and could do with work and illustrations.
• The cultivation section links to articles that don't exist, but which could easily be written.
• A section on nematode-capturing fungi (or preferably a link to a new article) would be nice.
• etc. polypompholyx 10:04, 24 January 2006 (UTC)

Somehow I managed to find the time :) The article is now fairly well referenced (although it could do with more). The other sections mentioned could still do with some work, and the last half of the article could really do with breaking up with some images. polypompholyx 15:43, 17 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Original rewrite

I'm planning to rewrite this article so that it is something more interesting than a list of genera. Something along the lines of the following...

• Trapping mechanisms
• Classification
• Evolution
• Ecology
• Cultivation
• Pop culture polypompholyx

Just the evolution and ecology sections left. If anyone wants to plagiarise my website [1] or similar and add to these, feel free! polypompholyx

cool, that looks so much better. The image layout looks a bit odd to me, but that is probably my stupid res screen (1600x1200) nick 21:01, 16 May 2005 (UTC)

Done. It could certainly do with some tarting up, expanding and prettifying with images, but I'll leave that to some other interested author! polypompholyx

[edit] Evolution section

I just reverted "assumed" to the orginal "deduced", in regard to what you can guess about the evolution of CP traps from their current structure (particularly the arrangement of xylem and phloem in the keel of Sarracenia spp). An assumption is what you presume about a situation, based on prior experience. The assumption here is that the vasculature of Sarracenia is similar in its ontogeny to other related plants; and that Sarracenia is subject to natural selection, both of which we can be fairly sure about. The inference that this structure evolved from the zipping up of a 'normal' leaf is a deduction, because it very likely follows from the assumptions. "Deduced" is far more appropriate than "assumed", although "hypothesised" would also be apposite. polypompholyx 13:33, 20 November 2005 (UTC)

Maybe "speculated" would be most accurate :-) --ChadThomson 09:12, 23 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Species

If you can interest, I have created a list of carnivorous plants taken by this database. --Kalumet Sioux 19:58, 31 January 2006 (UTC)

Those are appended to the individual genera's entries already, but thanks for the link! polypompholyx 15:43, 17 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Top Page

If it hasn't already, this article should be on the front page of wiki one of these days. Good work folks! --Kvuo 01:13, 27 April 2006 (UTC)

I second that. CodeCarpenter 20:55, 26 January 2007 (UTC)

I have sent it in for review, the first step of featured article status. If saffron can get in there, my venus flytrap can, too! CodeCarpenter 21:16, 26 January 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads-up. I'll keep my eye on it to help address issues brought up by reviewers. I also need to read through it one of these days to make sure it is up-to-date and accurate. My guess is that it needs to have way more sources cited, at least before it is considered for FA status. --NoahElhardt 03:37, 27 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Borderline carnivores

Greetings, all! I was hoping I could get your collective opinion on a proposition I have. Do you think it would be worthwhile to make the borderline carnivores section its own article (keep what's there, link to "main article," and expand upon the content that already exists) if I could substantially expand it or should I simply expand the section? Also, I've never really delved into the naming conventions, though I know most common name usually rules. There are three terms that can describe these kinds of plants:

• "Borderline carnivore" (Google hits: 94, most of which are wikipedia pages or in the context of vegetarianism); or "Borderline carnivorous" (Google hits: 19)
• "Protocarnivorous" (Google hits: 59)
• "Subcarnivorous" (Google hits: 45)

Most of the academic literature (and there isn't much!) speaks of "protocarnivorous" plants and doesn't mention "borderline carnivores." So I'm more prone to use protocarnivorous, but I want an objective opinion from any and all of you. Thanks in advance! --Rkitko 03:52, 9 May 2006 (UTC)

Borderline carnivore is likely a lay term. Subcarnivorous is the one I have heard used most, so I would go with that. Sorry I haven't been around/active much lately, finals have been keeping me busy. --NoahElhardt 15:03, 12 May 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for your reply. I hear protocarnivorous and subcarnivorous about equally, though always in the context of the other (it seems the authors of most literature on these species acknowledge that one is a synonym for the other). I have rarely seen a piece speak of borderline carnivores and acknowledge one of the others as a synonym (or vice versa). Hope your finals went well. I still have a couple weeks until my quarter is complete. ... Anyone else have any opinions on any of the above? --Rkitko 08:32, 13 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Popular culture

The Little Shop of Horrors (1960) was not "serious" as the previous version insists - it was a very funny comedy film. (Ibaranoff24 21:24, 12 June 2006 (UTC))

• I recently changed that part of the text around so it now mentions the 1960 film first, and then the musical, and then the 1986 film. (Ibaranoff24 21:50, 24 July 2006 (UTC))

For the purpose of this article, I'm not quite sure the following information is necessary:

...directed by Roger Corman. The film was remade as a musical play, which later became a film in 1986 (in the musical, the plant is named Audrey II).

I could see, potentially, how people might be looking for the more familiar name "Audrey II" from the 1986 film, but I would instead propose that the above quoted information be arranged like this:

Carnivorous plants have long been the subject of popular interest and exposition, much of it highly inaccurate. A fanciful carnivorous plant called Audrey Junior (not to be confused with the 1986 version's Audrey II) with an insatiable appetite was the central theme of the 1960 black comedy The Little Shop of Horrors

We don't necessarily need to know who the director of the film was here, or how many versions of the film there are--all we need to know is the subject matter (carnivorous plant) and how it relates to popular culture. Let me know your thoughts. There have been ongoing debates elsewhere on Wikipedia concerning the popular culture sections ballooning beyond the scope of the main article (see Talk:Hwacha for a revert war that was over this very topic). I'd like to avoid that here, so lend your opinion and let us discuss before we do anything on that! I'm also not very rigid on this point, it's just something I've seen out there on Wikipedia. Thanks! --Rkitko 01:25, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

• Interesting idea, but the off-Broadway musical ALSO had Audrey II instead of Audrey Junior. It wasn't just the 1986 film that had the name change. (Ibaranoff24 05:07, 25 July 2006 (UTC))

Thanks for going ahead and changing that. I'm glad we could incorporate the pertinent information. As for the Killer Tomatoes reference, having never seen the movie myself, I had to go off of what the IMDB and Amazon.com summaries say (which, surprise, they're the same--I wonder which one is the original?):

After a wave of reports of mysterious attacks involving people and pets being eaten by the traditionally docile fruit, a special government task force is set up to investigate the violent veggies and put a stop to their murderous spree.'

Does the movie simply state that there are news reports of people/pets being eaten where in the actual movie no pet or person is ever actually eaten? Even if it is the later, I still think there might be some way to craftily word the popular culture reference without adding too much detail and maintaining integrity to the truth of the film. Your insight would be greatly appreciated. Again, I'm not extremely worried if the reference isn't there--there's more than enough popular culture references. This is more intellectual curiosity. Thanks! Cheers, Rkitko 08:38, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

• There is no actual reference to anything being eaten by the tomatoes in the film. (Ibaranoff24 17:02, 25 July 2006 (UTC))

[edit] Soil for carnivorous plants

Carnivorous plants are better off having bad soil. Generally, peat or sphagnum moss is the best.

[edit] Great article

This article is fantastic. Have you considered submitting it as a featured article candidate? --P3d0 01:49, 19 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Evolution?

This page treats evolution as a fact, though it is not proven. Perhaps not state it so forcefully (as there were no witnesses, we can not know exactly how something evolved, or if it even evolved.) 216.56.60.130 17:59, 10 October 2006 (UTC)

I looked over the section on Evolution, and it seems quite balanced and fair to me. There are a few references earlier in the article that could be toned down a bit as you suggested, I'll see what I can do. --NoahElhardt 18:40, 10 October 2006 (UTC)

We could perhaps add a section that deals with Carnivorus from an creationistic perspective. How God almighty created this plant so that it could drown and kill flies and other insects. Or perhaps we go with the science and treat the evolution as a fact and stop believe in fairy tales like the bible! 213.112.157.243 18:00, 19 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Carnivorous plants in the News

Carnivorous Plant Eats Mouse At French Garden - a mammal-eating Nepenthes Truncata (see slideshow) ~Kylu (u|t) 17:37, 11 October 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for the note. This occurence has already been noted here and here. :) --NoahElhardt 17:45, 11 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Biggest animal eaten by a plant?

I think the article could use a sentence or small paragraph on the biggest animal known to have been caught and consumed by a plant, since a lot of people would be interested in that type of information. At www.saracenia.com, they state that small birds, frogs, and rodents have been consumed, and probably most of them were too weak to escape when trapped and would have died soon afterward even if they had not been caught and digested.204.80.61.10 14:21, 19 October 2006 (UTC)Bennett Turk

[edit] Links

Hello guys,

I saw that there have been indecisiveness of what links should be on this page and I was just wondering what links you guys though should be aloud? Right now we have two that go the the CP FAQ (ones goes to the "What movies (etc.) have references to carnivorous plants?" section ) and not one links to the ICPS or the CPS that seems a little absurd. -Jeremiah- —The preceding unsigned comment was added by JeremiahsCPs (talk • contribs) 08:04, 4 January 2007 (UTC).

Greetings. Thanks for coming here and asking for clarification. I hope I can clear things up for you. Check out the Wikipedia guidelines on acceptable links at WP:EL. The external links I usually remove from other pages are links to blogs, links to forums, etc. In this specific context, the reason why some links are removed and others aren't is that Wikipedia is not an internet directory with a list of all available external links. That is to say, the links to the ICPS and the CPS, while relevant, are not necessary here unless they serve as a direct reference (an article on the ICPS website, for example, that directly deals with the subject material--instead of a general link to their main page). An article on the International Carnivorous Plant Society, on the other hand, generally should have an external link directly to the ICPS website. Hope this helps. --Rkitko 09:52, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Here I would disagree slightly. The ICPS website and even major carnivorous plant-related forums are both big enough sources of further information on the subject that they are worth listing. I often add the ICPS link to species pages, and having forum links on the main CP article makes sense to me. --NoahElhardt 13:42, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Perhaps the ICPS website would indeed be helpful here. But I've watched external links sections with one "society" or "association" link that's associated with the subject material expand to dozens. Then which ones do you remove without entering a POV or preference for one over the others? Which ones are notable? When does the addition of these pages become less helpful and more like linkspam?

From WP:EL#Links normally to be avoided:

10. Links to social networking sites (such as MySpace), discussion forums or USENET.

13. Sites that are only indirectly related to the article's subject: it should be a simple exercise to show how the link is directly and symmetrically related to the article's subject. This means that there is both a relation from the website to the subject of the article, and a relation from the subject of the article to the website. For example, the officially sanctioned online site of a rock band has a direct and symmetric relationship to that rock band, and thus should be linked from the rock band's Wikipedia article. An alternative site run by fans is not symmetrically related to the rock band, as the rock band has only indirect connections with that site.

I'd say if and when the International Carnivorous Plant Society page is created, a link to their main website is appropriate (and I think we do need to create that page sometime soon!). Otherwise it doesn't really belong unless there's a link to a specific resource (FAQ, article, index of articles in the CPN Journal, etc.). Perhaps since the section title of that WP:EL guideline is "Links normally to be avoided" there is some way to see what an editor or admin more familiar with WP:EL policy thinks? --Rkitko 18:32, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Fault

Very few fossils have been found, and all that do exist are either seed or pollen. Sorry, but this is not correct, see Aldrovanda inopinata or Archaeamphora longicervia. Denisoliver 07:24, 27 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Text interruptions

Is there any reason why at the end of nearly every section there is a <br style="clear:both" /> tag? Apparently, it breaks up the flow of text so that a new section title doesn't begin in the middle of an image for the previous section. Is this personal preference or a WP:MOS suggestion? Just curious if that's something we need to get rid of in order to pass for FA status. --Rkitko 21:54, 28 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Drosera image

I don't think, that the drosera on the image is rotundifolia. D. rotundifolia has different leaf morphology - the tentactules are not placed on the peduncle, the peduncle is usually narower and the end of the leafe is circular. This plat seems like D. capillaris, but I am not sure. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Petr Dlouhý (talk • contribs) 06:45, 2 February 2007 (UTC).

You are right. I fixed it. --NoahElhardt 16:09, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Missing Links

I saw the revert for the dead link on protocarnivorous. I created a stub until such time as the actual article is written. Before I remove the dead links for each of these, which I looked for similar topics on and was unsuccessful, I thought I would pass them by the experts to see if you see another stub needed. I was able to fix a couple of the existing missing links.

"plumbagin", (hydroplumbagin is the only link, not the same thing)
"trigger hair", (not found)
"Acid growth", (only listed for animals)
"vesicula", (only listed for male redroductive organs)
"Pameridea", (not listed as a genus of assassin bug)
"primary growth", (secondary growth exists, but not primary growth)
"adaxial", (no link, upper or stem facing leaf)
"peltate", (general definition in leaf, but no links)
"net photosynthesis", (found Net Primary Productivity as closest match)
"carboxylase", (too general, no link for just carboxylase)
"Acephate", (Organophosphorus Incecticide, no link)
"Orthene", (Organophosphorus Incecticide, no link)
"Dr Carl Liche", (five references, no links)
"Mkodos", (three references, no links)
"Planta", (no links to reference exist)
"Oecologia", (no links to reference exist)
"Belgian Journal of Botany", (no links to reference exist)
"Plant Biology (Stuttgart)" (no links to reference exist)
CodeCarpenter 19:10, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

Actually, the protocarnivorous plant article is in the works (see User:Rkitko/sandbox). Some of the above terms will have articles created in the future, so I'm comfortable leaving them as is. Some of the others are unlikely to, or just need to be linked correctly. "Peltate", for example, could just be linked to Leaf shape. --NoahElhardt 19:19, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Ecology and modelling of carnivory

I think that the "of carnivory" part of the section heading is unnecessary (see Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#Sections_and_headings). We're talking about "Carnivorous plant" after all. Xiner (talk, email) 17:58, 4 February 2007 (UTC)