Talk:Ahn Eak-tai
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[edit] Merge proposal
Support merge of Ahn Eak-tae into Ahn Eak-tai (with redirects. Ahn Eak-tai seems to be more prevalently used, and may have been the romanization Ahn himself preferred. Badagnani 08:40, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
- Done. Badagnani 23:12, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Clarifications
Thank you so much for your peer review! The article feels fresh and clean now. Here are the answers. Please make changes as you see fit because honestly I don't know how to deliver these details in suitable format.
- I think that it was a roofless car.
- wouldn't this be the cello of one of the friends rather than belonging to all the friends?
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- I think his friends randomly let him borrow from day to day, like taking turns.
(Wikimachine 01:31, 28 November 2006 (UTC))
- Yes, concours is competition here. Thanks a lot! (Wikimachine 01:37, 28 November 2006 (UTC))
[edit] This Site
Does this site tell the truth about Ahn's 1928 concerts in Korea? I thought it was in summer of 1926. (Wikimachine 02:44, 30 November 2006 (UTC))
[edit] GA on hold
- References go after puncuation, not before, so Orchestra[1]. will be Orchestra.[1] etc
- An article this size needs a two paragraph lead
- Web references arent formatted properly, check {{cite web}}
- External links go at the end of the article
- See also, has one link, surely it can be merged into the body or removed
- [7][4]. should be [4][7]
- The article reads way too much like a story, he did this, he got accepted into this, in the summer he did this,
- Ahn returned to Korea|||after 11 years away from home. redundant
- Some sentence don't flow very well, example Therefore, Ahn sought for a job, and was hired in a luxurious restaurant to play his cello[10]. Even this was not enough to pay for the school tuition, Ahn would not graduate. As Ahn suffered from financial hardship, his friends offered help.
- title heading 'In the United States' then 'Europe', keep it just to United States or America. Also add this template at the top of external links
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M3tal H3ad 05:58, 5 January 2007 (UTC)
- Thank you so much! I'll make the changes immediately. (Wikimachine 19:24, 6 January 2007 (UTC))
- All changes were applied, and the article doesn't sound like a story anymore. Or are the grammar fixes in themselves erroneous? Don't forget about this article! (Wikimachine 01:38, 10 January 2007 (UTC))
- I'm still here. Only problem now is references like this [35][1] , [26][4](should be smaller number first) and a few more of those, only minor so i will pass this. M3tal H3ad 02:15, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks! I'll make those changes (I made more problems in the process of fixing) (Wikimachine 02:34, 10 January 2007 (UTC))
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