Talk:Barry Manilow/Comments
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I think that a "B" rating is correct for this article at this time. There are a number of improvements that can be made, writing being the first priority. Because the article is so long, tightening up the content will help. The first phrase in the "bio" section reads "Manilow was born to humble origins..." While a sympathetic start to a biography or fan site, not a good way to start an encyclopedia article. There is a lot of good material here to work with, it's a good time to make the prose sparkle. You might consider requesting a peer review to get more suggestions for improvement. Nightngle 18:59, 19 December 2006 (UTC)
- I do not change the rating, until the GAC review is over. The article is informative, but not thoroughly referenced. Let's see what the GAC reviewers will say, and then or even now a review could be helpful.--Yannismarou 09:19, 6 January 2007 (UTC)
