Talk:Mahr Vehl

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[edit] Making the article about fiction

To fit the accepted character-article model, I changed the past tense to the present tense. I also included specific references to issues and to Mahr Vehl's creator, Warren Ellis. Bhissong 22:40, 27 June 2006 (UTC)bhissong

I applaud your efforts. I think the article is getting better, but it needs a lot of work, like most comic book character articles. I am not trying to sound pedantic, but I believe the idea is to keep the plot details to a minimum and focus on the character, how he was written, his effects in the Ultimate Marvel universe, and other such, not to tell everything that ever happened to him. Only include the information that is necessary to understanding the character and some notable events but keep it short and keep it in context of reality. I think this is the project. I tried condensing some, but it's been a while since I read the comic. I'll do what I can to help over time. --Newt ΨΦ 02:23, 28 June 2006 (UTC)

Condensed story info; focused more on character info; more to be done. Bhissong 18:03, 28 June 2006 (UTC)bhissong

You're doing a good job. I'll help out when I can. I most often look at Wikipedia at work, so I don't have a lot of time to edit, just comment on edits. A good reference is Wikipedia:Manual of Style (writing about fiction). --Newt ΨΦ 20:59, 28 June 2006 (UTC)

Good job! I did a little clean up. I think the article looks much better now. It could probably use a little citing and maybe some words from Warren Ellis or Steve McNiven on why he did things the way he did with this reboot, but overall much better. --Newt ΨΦ 02:22, 29 June 2006 (UTC)

To Newt ΨΦ, thanks for the suggestions to change the article. It needed to be streamlined and more in line with other character-articles. Nice work. Bhissong 00:18, 30 June 2006 (UTC)bhissong