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I've introduced into the discussion (marginally) the possibility that the book may in fact be pseudophilosophy, as contended in that article.

I rather liked the book, and not being a philosopher, I would appreciate it if someone could explain what the particular strikes against the book (as "philosophy") are. This book (I haven't read the sequel) doesn't seem to set itself up as anything like a complete philosophy, in my recollection. I liked the idea of "Quality" as the medium in which the subjective and objective interact, and the attempted synthesis of Western and Eastern thought in that idea, though I'm not sure what would or wouldn't make it philosophical. I also was amused by Phaedrus' view on Plato (that his distaste for the Sophists was a result of his desperately trying to raise the Logos out of the Mythos, and he needed to blast them to secure a place for the concept of objective truth). I don't know much about the accuracy of the argument, as all I've read of Plato is the Meno, but I found it at least interesting. Assuming somebody more versed in philosophy (and having read this book) finds this entry, please answer! Vivacissamamente 02:03, 2 May 2005 (UTC)

Well, I would suggest you read Lila, which is really where his 'Metaphysics of Quality' was developed, and decide for yourself. Then, you can go about labeling his work with first hand knowledge and without having to defer to 'many philosophers' (who?) and not have to append your edits with a question mark. Jordan Langelier 14:30, 2 May 2005 (UTC)

(Removing my personal attack) Jordan Langelier 15:10, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

I felt my comment made it clear that I didn't feel I was attacking Pirsig or you, but trying to incorporate an opinion from another article (which I was so credulous as to assume was actually held by someone, rather than a vehicle of sheer malice). Wikipedia seems to collect and list positions rather than taking them, and I was listing one I had found somewhere else, so that some people more knowledgable, and possibly not already committed to a position, could balance it out or at least include an interesting critique. Presumably the philosophers, unless they are completely fictitious, had their reasons, and I thought hearing them might be more productive than erasing them because they displeased us.

I also thought perhaps I could learn something by asking, and it might be faster and fit better into my time than reading the book (as annoying as it is, I know, to hear people complain of limited time). You have not been very educational in this regard, instead claiming superior knowledge, putting me down, and potentially setting me up to be more receptive to the slanderers, if they will be so good as to put in their two cents. "Clueless" is rather ungenerous. Having read one book is better than reading none. Asking for information seems better than not. I understand you like Pirsig (and I liked what I read), but you have made this personal. Vivacissamamente 22:26, 2 May 2005 (UTC)

(Removing my unnecessary criticism) Jordan Langelier 15:10, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

Obviously you caught me on a bad day, and I apologize. My tone was uncalled for and counterproductive. I gave it some thought and what set me off was due to a tendency on Wikipedia to 'label' various subjects (for example, refusing to allow some supposed hack writer to be called a 'reporter' or some popular writer be called a 'historian' and the like. It seems that many people just out and out HATE certain subjects, and it makes them happy to cast aspersions on their scholarship or professionalism. I don't think this is what you were doing. I can understand why some philosophers might not consider Pirsig a serious philosopher, but I still stand by my opinion that it needs some context and some references, rather than a blanket pejorative in the first paragraph. Again, I regret my behavior and apologize. Jordan Langelier 15:10, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

I think the criticism should have been left—it created context and was probably amusing to anyone it wasn't directed at—but no matter. If you do have possible explanations of the allegations, I think this page and the pseudophilosophy page (and my knowledge) could be bettered by a discussion of what in Pirsig's work makes it philosophy or not. Perhaps it could be introduced in a section named ==Criticism== or something like that. If you're up to it, I look forward to reading it. Peace be with you. Vivacissamamente 15:29, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

I'm not up to the task. I'd have to think that the reasons someone could call his views 'not philosophy', though, would be a) Pirsig published books intended for mass consumption and not anything which can be considered 'scholarly' b) Pirsig was not a member of the philosophers community, having been simply an English professor. c) A true 'philosopher' in the academic sense must have broad knowledge in philosophic fields he does not necessarily agree with in order to intelligently discuss them. Pirsig tended to (understandably) study only those things he found interesting or of immediate use. d) Pirsig did not follow the standard modus operandi 'real university philosophers' would do (whatever that is). Again, this goes towards him not having to prove anything to anyone but himself, and therefore was not obliged to follow conventional practices in the philosophic community. But those are just guesses. I did an internet search, and the only references to Pirsing and pseudophilosophy were because of Wikipedia content ;^) But Zen and the Art most CERTAINLY IS NOT philosophy, nor is it pseudophilosophy. It is a novel. Now, if one want's to debate whether his Metaphysics of Quality (which was only touche on in Zen and the Art and not developed to any real degree until 'Lila') is 'a philosophy' or not, that's a different matter. But his books are certainly not 'Philosophy Books' but rather, mass-market novel which have many interesting, philosophic-like ideas. Jordan Langelier 18:06, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

Contents 1 clean-up 2 Non-intellectual Zen-like view of the universe 3 Pirsig sharply criticizes Great Books program? 4 MoQ and SoM and the Quantonics website

[edit] clean-up

The plot of Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance involves a cross-country trip on a motorcycle by the author, his son and two friends. At the beginning of the novel he explicitly states that large portions of the trip were edited for the novel "for the sake of rhetoric". During the trip, however, the main character divulges his collection of material from a philosopher he names Phaedrus. Although Pirsig refers to Phaedrus in the third person, it soon becomes apparent that Phaedrus 'was' Pirsig himself prior to receiving shock treatment for mental illness. As the trip proceeds, the plot splits into three forks: the physical journey, Pirsig's musings on Quality, and the story of Phaedrus. The first is largely narrative, the second philosophical and the third introspective.

This paragraph tries to do too much.

1. Distinguish between Pirsig and the novel's main character.
2. Describe the three forks of the novel

I suggest that any controversy about "how much of himself" went into the novel, be treated separately - and probably further down on the page. Let's find out what the novel is about first. Uncle Ed 17:29, 20 October 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Non-intellectual Zen-like view of the universe

I found the comment, "non-intellectual Zen-like view of the universe" very offenceive. To call a religion or a philosophy "non-intellectual" is rather...well non-intelectual. Is it not a fact and it doesn't seem very neutral.Fistagonfive 02:29, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

My understanding of Zen philosophy is very limited, but from the little that I know it becomes rather clear that non-intellectual experience is to a great extent a goal of any practitioner of the religion, as it seems to be in other Eastern religions as well. By non-intellectual what is meant is that the internal narrative of the conscious mind is silent or less prominent and reality is experienced and understood more directly and without being processed by the mind's intellectual faculties and the prejudices that go along with it. There is nothing whatsoever offensive about it. Michael%Sappir 23:05, 4 February 2006 (UTC)

"Non-intellectual" is not meant in a negative way here, so I don't see any need to take offense. Intellectuality is more... beside the point in regards to Zen. Its not that it does or doesn't strive for it. It "seeks" to experience the world before its processed by the mind, as then the mind is free to react to things in a genuine way and not out of pre-formed ideas and concepts. Of course any words are going to fail, so some license should be allowed. But the word Zen is also taking on a separate meaning in itself of no-mind, flow, stream-of-consciousness experience. Losing your self-consciousness on a roller coaster ride means you are in a state of being "non-intellectual" in this sense. This word fitting is poor, but we can only word things the best we can. Feel free to reword it if you see something that works better.

Zen teachers strive to keep their students from over-intellectualizing things, as this creates a mind-state that interferes with direct experience. They need to see... "aha! So there are multiple facets to things that I have not been seeing because my intellectual mind had me caged in an idea. But there is truthfully no "pro or con" in zen regarding the idea of being intellectual. Non-thought-embraced might even work. In today's world, we over-intellectualize just about everything. To reduce some of that isn't a bad thing.

I don't know if this helps, but I enjoyed writing it. --DanielCD 21:15, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

non-intellectualizing, non-conceptualizing Zen-like direct view of the universe

I thought I'd try this, but feel free to revert it if you wish. I don't mind being reverted. --DanielCD 21:20, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Pirsig sharply criticizes Great Books program?

I don't know who introduced this sentence, but just because you study the Great Authors, doesn't mean a program is a Great Books program. There are certain teachers who take the approach of trying to interpret the classics in such a way as to find as much truth as possible in them, which is presumably what Phaedrus' opponent, the university department chair was getting at, but just because such an approach employs the Great Books, doesn't make the two curriculums the same.

The Great Books program (which was abandoned long previously to Phaedrus' attendance at the University of Chicago) takes a dialectical approach called Shared Inquiry: discuss the Great Books, determine the issues involved, weigh the evidence of all sides in light of the participants understanding and experience, and sift through more relative truths in order to find more firmly established truths.

Tellingly, in his novel, Pirsig recites the merits of one of the founder of the Great Books model's approach, Mortimer Adler. Pirsig goes on by way of criticism, simply to say that he feels Adler took his studies up to a certain point in intellectual history, and did not go beyond that. Pirsig's implication in claiming that Adler had terminated the scope of his research, is that through Pirsig's own form of inquiry (which is in fact the term employed in the subtitle of his book), he thought he had discovered something new through sifting through his predecessor's ideas in light of his own understanding and experience, and with such an approach, one can hardly regard it as a renunciation of his predecessors in the Great Books tradition.

Perhaps someone else can write a replacement sentence describing Pirsig's relationship to his instructors at the University of Chicago characterizing those instructors in a more accurate manner. 64.154.26.251 02:31, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] MoQ and SoM and the Quantonics website

This website:

http://www.quantonics.com/

...is quite dense, erudite, and almost unreadable... but Doug Renselle seems to use Pirsig's philosophical interests in its construction (or did initially). If you dont do anything else, just check the list of essays devoted to 'Essence' and 'Pirsig' on the Homepage.

Can we add it to the External Links section? What do you think? Drakonicon 10:20, 19 August 2006 (UTC)