Talk:De La Salle-Santiago Zobel School

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De La Salle-Santiago Zobel School (reviewed version) has been listed as a good article under the good-article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can delist it, or ask for a review.

[edit] Tips

The section titles should conform to WP:MOS (especially capitalization), and the captions too. --Howard the Duck 14:25, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] GA passes

This is a comprehensive, well-illustrated, well-sourced, well-organized article. Congratulations! It wasn't easy to do this in a way that didn't sound like an advertisement (It may well promote the school, but it will do so while staying within Wikipedia strictures).

Suggestions for future improvements.

• A longer intro; there's certainly enough in the article to justify more up there.

• Some copyediting to strain out the occasional typos.

• Most importantly, consider moving some of the images to the alternating-left-and-right placement, at least where they've created some formatting problems with the edit links.

• The 45K of length isn't a major problem for me, but the campus section strikes me as long enough that, following the example of some longer articles on U.S. colleges and universities, a daughter article could be spun off.

Good luck and congratulations once again. Daniel Case 12:51, 23 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Delist

Until the section titles are conformed into the manual of style I'll be delisting this by the weekend. --Howard the Duck 15:02, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

Anything else that needs to be addressed? --Mithril Cloud 16:02, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

It's fixed already (the threat of delisting can do wonders hehehe). --Howard the Duck 06:09, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

Haha, nice one. :p --Mithril Cloud 06:21, 16 December 2006 (UTC)